50 word challenge
Friday February 15th 2013, 9:52 am  Tagged , ,
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Here’s the 50 word challenge! Look at the picture and write what you see.  Remember to use capitals, full stops, spaces, wow words and most importantly…to do your writing all on your own.

 





     
12 Comments so far

I am looking forward to reading your snowy writing, i think it will really help our children with their learning.

   miss phillips on 02.15.13 @ 10:26 am    Reply

I can see a poler be ar crosing the cold icey river in the artic were it,s snowy and cold. The river is shiny and blue.Wow ! it’s butyfull.Some of the snow look like a swiming poler bear.

   sneha on 02.18.13 @ 8:30 pm    Reply

    What brilliant ‘wow’ words you’ve used Sneha. You noticed the reflection of the polar bear in the water too, very clever!

       missmcdonald on 02.24.13 @ 2:20 pm    Reply

I can see a littile sweet loenly cob freasing in the ice. And it is could sam and sam is looking for 20 bits of samen. But sam forls in the water with a splash splish splosh.

   Daisy on 02.23.13 @ 8:24 pm    Reply

I like that you put the polar bear looks ‘freasing’ and ‘loenly’ Daisy, you’ve really thought about how they might feel. The ‘splish, splash, splosh’ words for the Sam falling in have a lovely sound, all starting with the same letter.

   missmcdonald on 02.24.13 @ 2:25 pm    Reply

Thank you Miss Mcdonald I will give you a special card. love Daisy Mason xxx

   Daisy mason on 02.24.13 @ 6:50 pm    Reply

I see a polar bear. He has a fish. There is snow. He has a black nose. The polar bear is jumping over the water to get to the other side. The water is really blue.

   Abigail on 02.26.13 @ 7:09 pm    Reply

I can see the cub is scaird to go in the isy whater.The cub is woreid and lonle.The cub is fllufe and worm.The cub is wit.The whater is dep and cold.

   ashvin on 02.26.13 @ 7:12 pm    Reply

You have used your full stops and capital letters very carefully Abigail. I like that you have said the polar bear has a fish, not something I thought of.

   missmcdonald on 02.26.13 @ 9:22 pm    Reply

Lovely writing Ashvin. The words you have used to describe how the cub is feeling are brilliant. You’ve really made me think about how the cub feels as well as what I can see he looks like.

   missmcdonald on 02.26.13 @ 9:24 pm    Reply

I can see a polar Bear and some ice in the water and his fur is white. He has A mummy.

   Justice on 03.16.13 @ 12:09 pm    Reply

I can see mummy polar bear helping her baby polar across over. The water around them looks dark blue and cold.

   Micah Smith on 06.30.13 @ 9:20 am    Reply


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